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Chandrasekhar Reddy Posted 10 years ago
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After a lot of struggle and hardworking, he got the job. However the happiness seem to be not lasting long as government suspended him for his rude behavior towards his colleagues.
  

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Chandrasekhar Reddy After a lot of struggle and hardworking, he got the job. However the happiness seem to be not lasting long as government suspended him for his rude behavior towards his colleagues. I'd put a comma after "However".

  • Chandrasekhar Reddy After a lot of struggle and hardworking, he got the job.
  • However the happiness seem to be not lasting long as government suspended him for his rude behavior towards his colleagues.
  • I'd put a comma after "However".
  • There are two sentences there and both are correct.
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Chandrasekhar Reddy After a lot of struggle and hardworking, he got the job. However the happiness seem to be not lasting long as government suspended him for his rude behavior towards his colleagues.
I'd put a comma after "However". There are two sentences there and both are correct.
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Chandrasekhar Reddy After a lot of struggle and hardworking, he got the job. However the happiness seem to be not lasting long as government suspended him for his rude behavior towards his colleagues.
After much struggle and hardwork, he finally got the job with the government. However, the happy moments seemed to be short-lived because he was suspended for hi

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