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Chandrasekhar Reddy Posted 11 years ago
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Is my sentence correct?

There is a growing despondency in the team and this is the team to rejuvenate them.
  

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Your sentence is confusing. I suggest you rephrase it. Are you talking about one or two teams, and who does "them" refer to?

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  • Your sentence is confusing.
  • I suggest you rephrase it.
  • Are you talking about one or two teams, and who does "them" refer to?
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Your sentence is confusing. I suggest you rephrase it. Are you talking about one or two teams, and who does "them" refer to?
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Chandrasekhar Reddyand this is the team
Are you talking about another team?
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Chandrasekhar Reddy There is a growing despondency in the team and this is the team to rejuvenate them.
I believe the underlined words are wrong and that you intended to write something different there.

CJ
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