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Chandrasekhar Reddy Posted 11 years ago
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Is my sentence correct?

Always managers should stand by employees but not by company management. A good manager is the one who always takes employees concerns to the notice of the management and get the issues sorted out. Bur our manager lacks these qualities in him.
  

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A good manager is the one who always puts employees concerns in the mind of the management , and sorts the issues out . Unfortunately , our manager dosn't have any of these qualities. I think this is a better way of saying it .

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  • A good manager is the one who always puts employees concerns in the mind of the management , and sorts the issues out .
  • Unfortunately , our manager dosn't have any of these qualities.
  • I think this is a better way of saying it .
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I think that you have problem in punctuation."Managers are always supposed to stand by employees side , not by company management side.A good manager is the one who always puts employees concerns in the mind of the management , and sorts the issues out . Unfortunately , our manager dosn't have any of these qualities.
I think this is a better way of saying it .
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Chandrasekhar ReddyAlways managers should stand by employees
'always' goes after the auxiliary verb if there is one, and you need a determiner for 'employees', so you need Managers should always stand by their employees.
Chandrasekhar Reddybut not by company management.
I would use 'and not
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Chandrasekhar ReddyA good manager is the one who always takes employees concerns to the notice of the management and get the issues sorted out.
You're using more words than you really need. And it's "bring to the attention of", not "takes to the notice of".

A good manager always brings employees
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