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Chandrasekhar Reddy Posted 11 years ago
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Is my sentence correct?

I want to see you without shedding tears of sorrow at any point of time.
I always want to see you leading happy married life.
  

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It's a bit "gushy", but it gets the message across. The first sentence isn't clear as to who might be shedding tears, but the second clarifies it.

— Philip

  • It's a bit "gushy", but it gets the message across.
  • The first sentence isn't clear as to who might be shedding tears, but the second clarifies it.
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It's a bit "gushy", but it gets the message across. The first sentence isn't clear as to who might be shedding tears, but the second clarifies it.
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