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Messier42 Posted 12 years ago
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Is my sentence correct?

After working out, I was supposed to return the towel that I used in the gym. I accidentally brought it out all the way to my car. After realizing it, I was thinking "what if I was taken by CCTV n me holding the towel naturally in the picture hangs on the wall".
Is my sentence correct?
  

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messier42 Is my sentence correct? It falls apart here: taken by CCTV n me holding the towel naturally in the picture hangs on the wall CJ

— CalifJim

  • messier42 Is my sentence correct?
  • It falls apart here: taken by CCTV n me holding the towel naturally in the picture hangs on the wall CJ
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messier42Is my sentence correct?
It falls apart here: taken by CCTV n me holding the towel naturally in the picture hangs on the wall

CJ
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What if my picture in which I am holding the towel naturally is taken by CCTV and it hangs on the wall. Is this better?
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messier42 What if my picture in which I am holding the towel naturally is taken by CCTV and it hangs on the wall. Is this better?
Oh. You mean they take a picture of you with the towel and they hang it on the wall in the gym (to shame you)?

CJ
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Yea it means what you understood.
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messier42 Yea it means what you understood.
OK. Then here's my version of your story.

At the gym where I work out, you're supposed to return the towel they provide before you leave, but one day I had already got all the way to my car before I realized that I had taken the towel with me. I was immediately struck by the thought that the security camera
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Wow,, that's really good version! Thank you!
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