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Baseri Posted 14 years ago
Letter Writing

Is my sentence correct?

Dear Friend,
I want to send an email to my adviser, I would really appreciate it if you could say your opinion about my sentence.

Dear Professor R.,
Thank you for your consideration and kindness. If you let me I will prepare my proposal presentation for next group meeting on around 16 November (as we discussed in latest Individual meeting). Moreover, I would really appreciate it if you let me know your opinion about attendance of Mr. H. to our group meeting that will be held within this week, I think it can help Mr. H. to be more serious.
About final project, Mr. H. and I are Following-up to provide cadavers from our university if possible. The result will be known this week.
Sincerely yours,
Amin Baseri
  

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, Thank you for your consideration and kindness. If you will permit me , I will prepare my proposal presentation for our next group meeting on around 16 November, as we discussed in our latest individual meeting. I would really appreciate it if you could also let me know your opinion about the attendance of Mr.

  • , Thank you for your consideration and kindness.
  • If you will permit me , I will prepare my proposal presentation for our next group meeting on around 16 November, as we discussed in our latest individual meeting.
  • I would really appreciate it if you could also let me know your opinion about the attendance of Mr.
  • H.
  • at our group meeting to be held this week.
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Dear Professor R.,

Thank you for your consideration and kindness. If you will permit me, I will prepare my proposal presentation for our next group meeting on around 16 November, as we discussed in our latest individual meeting.

I would really appreciate it if you could also let me know your opinion about the attendan

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