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Baseri Posted 14 years ago
Letter Writing
Is my sentence correct?
Dear Friends,
Hi
My friend and I want to send an email to a professor; I would really appreciate it if you could say your opinion about it.
Dear Mr. Professor
Mr. A. H. and I are two master student from Iran and interested in your field of research, if you let us we want to introduce yourself to you and have scientific relationship with you and your group and hope to be qualified to joint to your research group and your university in future.
At the following a brief about each one of us is informed and our resume attached to this email as well. If you let us more details will be present at individual Emails.
Mr. A. H.
Details about Mr. A. H.
Amin Baseri
Master student in IAUSRB and interested in mechanobiology in bone healing. I hope with expanding my knowledge about mechanobiology find better solution for Preventionvvand treatment of bone disease. Currently I'm working on my thesis with Dr. G. R. and his Group.
We are look forward to hear from you.
Thanks in advance.
Sincerely yours,
A. H. And Amin Baseri
Hi
My friend and I want to send an email to a professor; I would really appreciate it if you could say your opinion about it.
Dear Mr. Professor
Mr. A. H. and I are two master student from Iran and interested in your field of research, if you let us we want to introduce yourself to you and have scientific relationship with you and your group and hope to be qualified to joint to your research group and your university in future.
At the following a brief about each one of us is informed and our resume attached to this email as well. If you let us more details will be present at individual Emails.
Mr. A. H.
Details about Mr. A. H.
Amin Baseri
Master student in IAUSRB and interested in mechanobiology in bone healing. I hope with expanding my knowledge about mechanobiology find better solution for Preventionvvand treatment of bone disease. Currently I'm working on my thesis with Dr. G. R. and his Group.
We are look forward to hear from you.
Thanks in advance.
Sincerely yours,
A. H. And Amin Baseri
Top answer
Dear Professor [ surname ], A . H. and I are two master's students from Iran , and we are interested in your field of research.
- Dear Professor [ surname ], A .
- H.
- and I are two master's students from Iran , and we are interested in your field of research.
- We would like to introduce ourselves to you , and we hope to qualify to join your research group and your university in future.
- Following is a brief about each of us , and our resumes are attached to this email as well.
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Dear Professor [surname],
A. H. and I are two master's students from Iran, and we are interested in your field of research. We would like to introduce ourselves to you, and we hope to qualify to join your research group and your university in future.
Following is a brief about each of us, and ou
A. H. and I are two master's students from Iran, and we are interested in your field of research. We would like to introduce ourselves to you, and we hope to qualify to join your research group and your university in future.
Following is a brief about each of us, and ou
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Hi and thank you for your consideration. at the following you can see a new version, I would really appreciate it if you could say your opinion about it.
P.s. I didn't understand your mean about signed.
Dear Professor M.,
A. H. and I are two master's students from Iran. We are interested in your field of research. We would like to introduce ourselves to you and have scientific re
P.s. I didn't understand your mean about signed.
Dear Professor M.,
A. H. and I are two master's students from Iran. We are interested in your field of research. We would like to introduce ourselves to you and have scientific re
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baseri I didn't understand your mean about signed.It indicates the place for your signature.
You have not incorporated the changes that I already indicated for your first draft. Please do that first, and then I will be willing to look at a new version.
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