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Baseri Posted 14 years ago
Letter Writing

is my sentence correct?

Dear Professor R,
Salam, I hope you would have had a prosperous Ramadan.
The people section of the website is revised and I'm waiting for Mrs. G. Confirmation.
We don't want anything from Canada ?Except your Health.
I attached a Persian Song to the this Message, I like it and hope you like it as well. I think signer is not saying all things but his song is right.
Sincerely
AB
  

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Dear Professor R, Salaam. I hope you have had a prosperous Ramadan. The people section of the website is revised and I'm waiting for Mrs .

  • Dear Professor R, Salaam.
  • I hope you have had a prosperous Ramadan.
  • The people section of the website is revised and I'm waiting for Mrs .
  • G's confirmation.
  • We don't want anything from Canada except your health.
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Dear Professor R,

Salaam. I hope you have had a prosperous Ramadan.

The people section of the website is revised and I'm waiting for Mrs. G's confirmation.

We don't want anything from Canada except your health. I have attached a Persian song to the this message. I like it and hope you like it as well. I don't think t
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Hi
I corrected your letter, as seen below:

Dear Professor R,
Salam, I hope you had a prosperous Ramadan.
The People section of the website has been revised and I'm waiting for Mrs. G. Confirmation.
We don't want anything from Canada ?Except your Health.( I don't know what you mean in this sentence)
I attached a Persian Song to the this message, I like it
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Thank you Dear Mister Micawber!
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Thank you Dear Shi Aina!
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You are most welcome!

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