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Zhileh Posted 14 years ago
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Is my sentence correct?
Hi everyone
I would be pleased if you check my sentence and help me in correcting it( both grammar & punctuation):
here is my sentence:
"Finally I can assert that he is quite reliable which is very important for me, mainly because, I need someone whom can be depended on with the feeling of trust."
warmest regards
I would be pleased if you check my sentence and help me in correcting it( both grammar & punctuation):here is my sentence:
"Finally I can assert that he is quite reliable which is very important for me, mainly because, I need someone whom can be depended on with the feeling of trust."
warmest regards
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Hello, zhileh—and welcome to English Forums. You can remove many unnecessary words and make your sentence more direct and effective. Finally , he is quite reliable , which is very important for me because I need someone whom I can depend upon.
- Hello, zhileh—and welcome to English Forums.
- You can remove many unnecessary words and make your sentence more direct and effective.
- Finally , he is quite reliable , which is very important for me because I need someone whom I can depend upon.
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Hello, zhileh—and welcome to English Forums. You can remove many unnecessary words and make your sentence more direct and effective.
Finally, he is quite reliable, which is very important for me because I need someone whom I can depend upon.
Finally, he is quite reliable, which is very important for me because I need someone whom I can depend upon.
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Dear Mister Micawber
hello and thanks for your attention .
Your answer was really complete and useful!, but I would be pleased if you answer my two more questions:
1-what is the difference between "upon" and "on" when we say "depend on" or "depend upon"
2-I am preparing myself for iBT toefl exam, so I have to improve my writing; furthermore, I thought that adding details to my
hello and thanks for your attention .
Your answer was really complete and useful!, but I would be pleased if you answer my two more questions:
1-what is the difference between "upon" and "on" when we say "depend on" or "depend upon"
2-I am preparing myself for iBT toefl exam, so I have to improve my writing; furthermore, I thought that adding details to my
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1-what is the difference between "upon" and "on" when we say "depend on" or "depend upon"-- None whatsoever. Some people use the older 'upon'.
2-I am preparing myself for iBT toefl exam, so I have to improve my writing; furthermore, I thought that adding details to my writing helps me to get a better score. what's your idea? Does it help my writing to be more acceptable or i
2-I am preparing myself for iBT toefl exam, so I have to improve my writing; furthermore, I thought that adding details to my writing helps me to get a better score. what's your idea? Does it help my writing to be more acceptable or i
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