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Rommel Posted 11 years ago
Grammar
Is my revision of the sentence correct?
Is my revision of the following sentence correct? (I revised it because it contains the words causes and causing which sound redundant.)
The virus causes the cell to explode, causing infectious particles to fly and scatter all over the body.
This is my revision: The virus causes the cell to explode and the infectious particles to fly and scatter all over the body.
What do you think of the correction I've made?
The virus causes the cell to explode, causing infectious particles to fly and scatter all over the body.
This is my revision: The virus causes the cell to explode and the infectious particles to fly and scatter all over the body.
What do you think of the correction I've made?
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'Fly' and 'scatter' are also redundant. The virus causes the cell to explode and infectious particles to scatter all over the body.
- 'Fly' and 'scatter' are also redundant.
- The virus causes the cell to explode and infectious particles to scatter all over the body.
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'Fly' and 'scatter' are also redundant.
The virus causes the cell to explode and infectious particles to scatter all over the body.
The virus causes the cell to explode and infectious particles to scatter all over the body.
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Mister Micawber'Fly' and 'scatter' are also redundant.Thank you, Mister Micawber. You made me smile again.
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