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Ilma Posted 14 years ago
Essay & Composition Writing

Is my poem correct grammatically? and how about the sentences? is it can be said as a poem? :P

No one knows, what will happen to me tomorrow
No one knows, what that i can reach tomorrow
No one knows, how bad or how good iam tomorrow
my future is in my hand
but even i don't know, what my hand will do tomorrow

The destiny can be so cruel
but it can be as nice as angel

one thing for sure
there is destiny
which is absolutely controlled by God
and God has never let me sacrificed many things,
but get nothing

so, i just can pray, and do my best

just do my best, let God do the rest
  

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No one know s wh at will happen to me tomorrow, n o one know s what I can reach tomorrow , n o one know s ho w bad or how good I'll be tomorrow . My future is in my hands, but even I don't kno w w hat my hands will do tomorrow . Destin y can be so cruel , but it can be as nice as an angel .

  • No one know s wh at will happen to me tomorrow, n o one know s what I can reach tomorrow , n o one know s ho w bad or how good I'll be tomorrow .
  • My future is in my hands, but even I don't kno w w hat my hands will do tomorrow .
  • Destin y can be so cruel , but it can be as nice as an angel .
  • One thing for sure : there is destiny which is absolutely controlled by *** , and *** has never let me sacrifice many things and get nothing .
  • So, I just pray , and do my best — just do my best and let *** do the rest.
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No one knows what will happen to me tomorrow,
no one knows what I can reach tomorrow,
no one knows how bad or how good I'll be tomorrow.
My future is in my hands,
but even I don't know what my hands will do tomorrow.

Destiny can be so cruel,
but it can be as nice as

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