Is my paragraph good to go?
It is for my peer-reviewed article. The paragraph below is my thoughts of the article I peer-reviewed on.
"I like to read all of this article because it helps me to understand my hair better. I had been taken care of my afro hair for many years, and I know how hard is taking care of my hair. I am taking Introduction to Chemistry class. Some terms in the article illuminated up the uncertainty of chemistry terms. Also, this makes me realized that I should not have my hair permed a long time ago. This article could be the perfect publication for those who want to have natural hair like me."
Top answer
All the sentences except the last have many grammatical errors. You need to rewrite the paragraph. You are missing subjects of verbs and there are quite a few idiomatic errors.
- All the sentences except the last have many grammatical errors.
- You need to rewrite the paragraph.
- You are missing subjects of verbs and there are quite a few idiomatic errors.
- After causal verbs like "have" or "make," the following verb for is the bare infinitive: make.
- The past tense should be on the principle verb that corresponds to the subject: this made me realize.
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All the sentences except the last have many grammatical errors. You need to rewrite the paragraph. You are missing subjects of verbs and there are quite a few idiomatic errors. After causal verbs like "have" or "make," the following verb for is the bare infinitive: make. The past tense should be on the principle verb that corresponds to the subject: this made me realize.
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What you describe is not a peer review. A peer review is done when a researcher submits an article for publication in a journal. Other researchers in the same discipline, but in diff
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