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Anonymous Posted 18 years ago
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IS MY PARAGRAPH CORRET JASON
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00 Many families today, eating dinner has become a place where family members do not eat together one may be in another location such as the living room watching television and the other will retreat to their corners of the house. Coming from a Chinese decent where having dinner with family is very important because it show that we care about each other and that we enjoy being together. Having dinner with my family is always a happy time for all of us because we enjoy being together. During dinner time our meal usually consisted of rice, three entrees, and soup. When eating a meal we must always use a chop stick the only exception for using a spoon is for soup and a folk for salads it’s the only way to show respect for our culture, but there time where chop stick don’t need to be use when we are together with family, but it’s a must when there are family gathering. 00 00 There is time we won’t be together as a family for dinner due to works and school. 00 0-
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00 Many families today, eating dinner has become a place where family members do not eat together one may be in another location such as the living room watching television and the other will retreat to their corners of the house. Coming from a Chinese decent where having dinner with family is very important because it show that we care about each other and that we enjoy being together. Having dinner with my family is always a happy time for all of us because we enjoy being together. During dinner time our meal usually consisted of rice, three entrees, and soup. When eating a meal we must always use a chop stick the only exception for using a spoon is for soup and a folk for salads it’s the only way to show respect for our culture, but there time where chop stick don’t need to be use when we are together with family, but it’s a must when there are family gathering. 00 00 There is time we won’t be together as a family for dinner due to works and school. 00 0-
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02 br 01 i 00 I'll fix the egregiously bad ones: 02 i 02 br 02 br 01 b 00 For many 02 b 00 families today, eating dinner has become a place where family members do not eat together 01 b 00 . One 02 b 00 may be in another location such as the living room watching television 01 b 00 , 02 b 00 and 01 b 00 others 02 b 00 will retreat to their corners of the house. 01 b 00 I come of 02 b 00 Chinese 01 b 00 descent, 02 b 00 where having dinner with family is very important because it 01 b 00 shows 02 b 00 that we care about each other and that we enjoy being together.
- 02 br 01 i 00 I'll fix the egregiously bad ones: 02 i 02 br 02 br 01 b 00 For many 02 b 00 families today, eating dinner has become a place where family members do not eat together 01 b 00 .
- One 02 b 00 may be in another location such as the living room watching television 01 b 00 , 02 b 00 and 01 b 00 others 02 b 00 will retreat to their corners of the house.
- 01 b 00 I come of 02 b 00 Chinese 01 b 00 descent, 02 b 00 where having dinner with family is very important because it 01 b 00 shows 02 b 00 that we care about each other and that we enjoy being together.
- Having dinner with 01 b 00 the 02 b 00 family is always a happy time for all of us because we enjoy being together.
- During dinner time 01 b 00 , 02 b 00 our meal usually 01 b 00 consists 02 b 00 of rice, three entrees and soup.
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01 b 00 For many 02 b 00 families today, eating dinner has become a place where family members do not eat together 01 b 00 . One 02 b 00 may be in another location such as the living room watching television 01 b 00 , 02 b 00 and 01 b 00
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01 b 00 For many 02 b 00 families today, eating dinner has become a place where family members do not eat together 01 b 00 . One 02 b 00 may be in another location such as the living room watching television 01 b 00 , 02 b 00 and 01 b 00
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