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Sere85 Posted 15 years ago
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Is my paragraph correct?
Hello!
I am applying to an internship and in the form they ask me to describe my university activities.
I wrote the paragraph but I don't know if it is correct or there are some mistakes...
I would be very glad if someone could read it...
thanks everyone!
Bye
Serena
My major subjects that I investigated during my university studies were the effects of international aid policies in developing countries and the international actors of cooperation, both governmental and non-governmental.
During my Bachelor degree I have focused on development theories and on the problems faced by countries in conflicts and in post- conflicts situation. I wrote an accademic paper on Darfur and my Bachelor's thesis was on the Rwandan genocide and on the role of the internal media in that situation.
In my master I have broaden my knoweldge of urban geography and local development continuing, at the same time, to study the international aid and development policies.
I linked this two subjects in my Master's Degree final dissertation that was about how the international actors, multilateral organizations and NGOs, influenced the housing policies in the cities of developing countries. An analysis of the issues related to the increased housing demand in fast-growing cities of developing countries has been a starting point in outlining the links between the international development agenda and its local implementation.
Finally I succesfully attended two workshops on the project cycle management in international cooeperation. The first, at univesty, on the evaluation and monitoring of international cooperation aid projects and the second, held by the camera di commercio di napoli with the university l'orientale, on the projects.
I am applying to an internship and in the form they ask me to describe my university activities.
I wrote the paragraph but I don't know if it is correct or there are some mistakes...
I would be very glad if someone could read it...
thanks everyone!
Bye
Serena
My major subjects that I investigated during my university studies were the effects of international aid policies in developing countries and the international actors of cooperation, both governmental and non-governmental.
During my Bachelor degree I have focused on development theories and on the problems faced by countries in conflicts and in post- conflicts situation. I wrote an accademic paper on Darfur and my Bachelor's thesis was on the Rwandan genocide and on the role of the internal media in that situation.
In my master I have broaden my knoweldge of urban geography and local development continuing, at the same time, to study the international aid and development policies.
I linked this two subjects in my Master's Degree final dissertation that was about how the international actors, multilateral organizations and NGOs, influenced the housing policies in the cities of developing countries. An analysis of the issues related to the increased housing demand in fast-growing cities of developing countries has been a starting point in outlining the links between the international development agenda and its local implementation.
Finally I succesfully attended two workshops on the project cycle management in international cooeperation. The first, at univesty, on the evaluation and monitoring of international cooperation aid projects and the second, held by the camera di commercio di napoli with the university l'orientale, on the projects.
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The major subjects that I chose for an intensive study during my university study are ' The effects of international aid policies in developing countries ' and ' The international actors of cooperation, both governmental and non-governmental'. During my graduation study I focused on development theories and the problems faced by countries during conflict and post- conflict situations . I wrote an academic paper on Darfur and my graduate study thesis was on the Rwandan genocide and the role of the internal media during the genocide .
- The major subjects that I chose for an intensive study during my university study are ' The effects of international aid policies in developing countries ' and ' The international actors of cooperation, both governmental and non-governmental'.
- During my graduation study I focused on development theories and the problems faced by countries during conflict and post- conflict situations .
- I wrote an academic paper on Darfur and my graduate study thesis was on the Rwandan genocide and the role of the internal media during the genocide .
- During my post graduate study I attempted to broaden my knoweldge of urban geography and local development and at the same time continued to study the international aid and development policies.
- I linked these two topics for my Master Degree final dissertation that was about how the international actors, multilateral organizations and NGOs influenced the housing policies in the cities of developing countries.
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The major subjects that I chose for an intensive study during my university study are 'The effects of international aid policies in developing countries' and 'The international actors of cooperation, both governmental and non-governmental'.
During my graduation study I focused on development theories and the problems faced by
During my graduation study I focused on development theories and the problems faced by
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