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Anna es Posted 10 years ago
Letter Writing
Is my motivation letter good?
To : German Consulate ,
Xx (city)
From : name
Date :
Address
e-mail
subject : motivation letter for long term student visa
Dear Sir \ Madam ,
I am writing to apply for long term student Visa ,in order to complete my post graduate study in Germany ; after getting my bachelor degree in medicine (MBBCH) from medical collage – xx university in sept 2012.
I have always thinking about my future, building career , becoming successful person and generally finding my own path in life. after graduation I started to workin gynecology obstetric department at xx medical centre in Sept 2012 . giving birth to child is an amazing thing , feeling like a mother for each fetus I had delivered. I attend ward rounds and duties where I had care with many critical patient in ER and ICU ,also I trained to normal vaginal delivery and assisted delivery, I was a surgeon and 1st assistant inmany elective and emergency cesarean sections. also I had opportunity to take care with many gynecological oncology , it was captivating that I could see the specialty from more complex side for example I was able to know the types of malignancy and the chemotherapy used to cure it . I was able to get close to many terminally ill patient helping and taking care of them and empathizing with them to build their spirits.
In iune 2015 I stared to work as demonstrator ingynecology obstetric department at medical collage – xx university , being a teacher is increasing my knowledge in my clinical career and be updated in my speciality .
I am self motivated ,determined individual and I look forward to clinical and academic challenges of my career.i am aware of the demand of the medical career but my commitment and passion to become a doctor has only been strengthened through my experience and work.I am very interested in persuading my study in Germany since its forfronted of this field , and in order to improve myself and get higher certificate and advanced training to come back to my country with better knowledge and qualification to collaborate to improve this side of medicine in my country which really nowadays needs an important push from the whole international community and needs enrichment in all field.
In supporting my visa application attached her with the following documents (enclosure of two copies) :
Long term visa form (Resident permit form)
c.v
copy of my educational degree
proof for employment
Proof of identity and marital state ( copy of passport , photos , birth certificate)
financial documents (bank statement)
pre payed deuch cource in Abendakademie
I am trust that you will find everything in order , and I remain at your disposal for any further information that you may need. Thank you very much for your time ! I hope fore and look forward to favorable response to my visa application .
Sincerely yours,
Xx
Xx (city)
From : name
Date :
Address
subject : motivation letter for long term student visa
Dear Sir \ Madam ,
I am writing to apply for long term student Visa ,in order to complete my post graduate study in Germany ; after getting my bachelor degree in medicine (MBBCH) from medical collage – xx university in sept 2012.
I have always thinking about my future, building career , becoming successful person and generally finding my own path in life. after graduation I started to workin gynecology obstetric department at xx medical centre in Sept 2012 . giving birth to child is an amazing thing , feeling like a mother for each fetus I had delivered. I attend ward rounds and duties where I had care with many critical patient in ER and ICU ,also I trained to normal vaginal delivery and assisted delivery, I was a surgeon and 1st assistant inmany elective and emergency cesarean sections. also I had opportunity to take care with many gynecological oncology , it was captivating that I could see the specialty from more complex side for example I was able to know the types of malignancy and the chemotherapy used to cure it . I was able to get close to many terminally ill patient helping and taking care of them and empathizing with them to build their spirits.
In iune 2015 I stared to work as demonstrator ingynecology obstetric department at medical collage – xx university , being a teacher is increasing my knowledge in my clinical career and be updated in my speciality .
I am self motivated ,determined individual and I look forward to clinical and academic challenges of my career.i am aware of the demand of the medical career but my commitment and passion to become a doctor has only been strengthened through my experience and work.I am very interested in persuading my study in Germany since its forfronted of this field , and in order to improve myself and get higher certificate and advanced training to come back to my country with better knowledge and qualification to collaborate to improve this side of medicine in my country which really nowadays needs an important push from the whole international community and needs enrichment in all field.
In supporting my visa application attached her with the following documents (enclosure of two copies) :
Long term visa form (Resident permit form)
c.v
copy of my educational degree
proof for employment
Proof of identity and marital state ( copy of passport , photos , birth certificate)
financial documents (bank statement)
pre payed deuch cource in Abendakademie
I am trust that you will find everything in order , and I remain at your disposal for any further information that you may need. Thank you very much for your time ! I hope fore and look forward to favorable response to my visa application .
Sincerely yours,
Xx
Top answer
Do not leave a space before punctuation marks. I do not know what this means—"deuch cource in Abendakademie"—so I cannot fix it. Date: To: German Consulate Xx (city) From: Name Address Subject: Motivation letter for long-term student visa Dear Sir or Madam, I am writing to apply for a long-term student visa in order to complete my post-graduate studies in Germany.
- Do not leave a space before punctuation marks.
- I do not know what this means—"deuch cource in Abendakademie"—so I cannot fix it.
- Date: To: German Consulate Xx (city) From: Name Address Subject: Motivation letter for long-term student visa Dear Sir or Madam, I am writing to apply for a long-term student visa in order to complete my post-graduate studies in Germany.
- I have always been thinking about my future, building my career, becoming successful, and generally finding my own path in life.
- After receiving my Bachelor's Degree in Medicine (MBBCH) at XX Medical College, XX University in September 2012, I started work in the gynecology obstetric department at xx Medical Centre.
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Do not leave a space before punctuation marks.
I do not know what this means—"deuch cource in Abendakademie"—so I cannot fix it.
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Date:
To: German Consulate
Xx (city)
From: Name
Address
Subject: Motivation letter for long-term student visa
Dear Sir or Madam,
I am writing to apply for a long-term stu
I do not know what this means—"deuch cource in Abendakademie"—so I cannot fix it.
.
Date:
To: German Consulate
Xx (city)
From: Name
Address
Subject: Motivation letter for long-term student visa
Dear Sir or Madam,
I am writing to apply for a long-term stu
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I would guess that "deuch cource" is meant to be "Deutsch course", and the whole thing would mean evening classes to study German.
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Thanks, BJ.
Then I'm not sure why it is 'prepaid', but it should read:
Prepaid German course at XX Abendakademie
Then I'm not sure why it is 'prepaid', but it should read:
Prepaid German course at XX Abendakademie
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I expect that it is a prerequisite, and the college wants to be satisfied that the applicant has made a financial commitment to it.
In German all nouns are capitalized, so I don't know if Abendakademie is part of the name of the institution, or if it is used here to refer to evening classes at the community college. Perhaps Anna can clarify what is meant.
In German all nouns are capitalized, so I don't know if Abendakademie is part of the name of the institution, or if it is used here to refer to evening classes at the community college. Perhaps Anna can clarify what is meant.
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Blue JayIn German all nouns are capitalizedYes, I know, but I presumed that if it was prepaid and had a document to prove it, then the name of the specific academy was called for.
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I agree. I was just commenting that Abendakademie might not actually be part of the name of the school, merely an indication of the time of day the classes are held.
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