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Moradar Posted 16 years ago
Letter Writing

Is my letter grammatically correct ?

Good Morning,

I found XXX posting for tester position and would like to apply. My testing experience combined with my Russian grammar knowledge provides me with an excellent opportunity to qualify for this position.
I am interested in this position because quality assurance is the most interesting activity for me. I have solid and confident understanding of testing methodologies, web technologies and excellent language skills in Russian and English.

I have a successful history of QA testing and resolving various Russian grammar issues during project localization phase. My top priority for the next 5 years is working at testing field for solid company. I am eager to learn and willing to contribute.
I can add-value to XXX because I'm detail-oriented and have unrelenting passion for grammar. Like Bob Shmurgen said at TechTest interview for tester.net - "...our secret is endless iteration. Go over and over until something is perfect" - this is my job; methodically polish and improve the product until it is perfect.
Thank you for your time.
Sincerely,
Moradar
  

Top answer

Here are my changes. The crossouts are the words/punctation in the original text that I would delete; the color bar words are my suggested replacements or corrections. The <bracketed words> are my format notes.

  • Here are my changes.
  • The crossouts are the words/punctation in the original text that I would delete; the color bar words are my suggested replacements or corrections.
  • The <bracketed words> are my format notes.
  • There is more than one correct way to say all this.
  • Good Morning, <add formal salutation here--see my note at bottom of page> I read your found *** posting for a tester position and would like to apply.
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Here are my changes. The crossouts are the words/punctation in the original text that I would delete; the color bar words are my suggested replacements or corrections. The <bracketed words> are my format notes. There is more than one correct way to say all this.

Good Morning, <add formal sal

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