Is my intro/sentence correct?
"Here are the 100 Bible Verses about Faith from the Old and New Testaments of The Holy Bible (King James Version) sorted from most to least relevant."
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If you would rewrite the sentence above, how would you rewrite it to make it better and more professional?
I'm going to use that as a short introduction to the compilation of Bible verses about faith that I'm creating right now. I will be sharing the PDF version of this project with my family and friends.
Besides the word "Bible", I'm not sure which words should always start in capital letters. Hope you can help me with this. 
Thank you very much!
Top answer
" To say " the 100", your readers would have to have been informed that 100 were forthcoming, or there would have to be only 100 such verses in the Bible. There is no justification for uppercase in "verses" and "faith". You have run into a couple of really cool oddities in style.
- " To say " the 100", your readers would have to have been informed that 100 were forthcoming, or there would have to be only 100 such verses in the Bible.
- There is no justification for uppercase in "verses" and "faith".
- You have run into a couple of really cool oddities in style.
- "Old Testament" and "New Testament" are capitalized, but when you run them together, logic forces us to put "testaments" in lowercase.
- The other oddity is that the Bible does not get italics as you might expect, it being a book.
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"Here are 100 Bible verses about faith from the Old and New testaments of the Holy Bible (King James Version), sorted from most to least relevant."
To say "the 100", your readers would have to have been informed that 100 were forthcoming, or there would have to be only 100 such verses in the Bible.
There is no justification for uppercase in "verses" and "faith".
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