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Anonymous Posted 14 years ago
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is my grammer correct?

May I know whether my sentence correct? This is my volunteer experience sentence in my resume:

"Enhanced communication skill across different levels of environment through being a volunteer at Red Cross by communicating and coordinating with colleagues. Obtained fundraising skills through manage donors details within the marketing department."
  

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I don't really understand what you have written. I have no idea what "different levels of environment " is.

  • I don't really understand what you have written.
  • I have no idea what "different levels of environment " is.
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I don't really understand what you have written.
I have no idea what "different levels of environment " is.

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