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Linus Fedora Posted 17 years ago
Grammar

Is my grammar correct?

In this sentence, is my grammar correct? If not, what should I change?

It is clear that the magazine says these cellphones with built-in flashlight were already made."If they had already existed, then the magazine would say they were revealed or something that suggested that your story is made up."
  

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You're sentence sounds ok, all you have to do is put a would and change suggested into suggest. The following is the correct sentence. It is clear that the magazine says these cellphones with built-in flashlight were already made.

  • You're sentence sounds ok, all you have to do is put a would and change suggested into suggest.
  • The following is the correct sentence.
  • It is clear that the magazine says these cellphones with built-in flashlight were already made.
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You're sentence sounds ok, all you have to do is put a would and change suggested into suggest.

The following is the correct sentence.

It is clear that the magazine says these cellphones with built-in flashlight were already made."If they had already existed, then the magazine would say they were revealed or something that would suggest that your story is made u
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