Is my first sentence using 'it,' 'with,' and 'dances' acceptable?
Is my first sentence using 'it,' 'with,' and 'dances' acceptable? What about the second and third sentences? Are they correct?
1. When the full was full at night, my peers celebrate it with songs and dances.
2. When the full was full at night, my peers sing and dance to celebrate it.
3. When the full was full at night, my peers sing and dance in celebration of it.
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" The three versions are okay, except you need to put both sides of the sentence in the same tense. ) However, you could avoid the whole "it" question by rewording: My peers celebrate the full moon by singing and dancing. Clear?
- " The three versions are okay, except you need to put both sides of the sentence in the same tense.
- ) However, you could avoid the whole "it" question by rewording: My peers celebrate the full moon by singing and dancing.
- Clear?
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I think you meant to write "When the moon was full at night."
The three versions are okay, except you need to put both sides of the sentence in the same tense. I would pick the present tense myself: "When the moon is full, my peers celebrate it with songs and dances." (I don't think "at night" is needed.)
However, you could avoid the whole "it" question by r
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