Is my English sentence correct?

Dear sales manager,
Firstly, thank you very much for the information you sent in your last email.
I would like to propose some significant points:
I am a group agent in Iran working in prototyping and medical applications. As you know, Iran and Middle East market possess many obstacles and problems like other growing markets but has significant potential to grow and to be developed.
Based on our activities and experiences in this field we have appropriate point of view about quantity and quality of other company products in this region like ‘’YYY’’.
As regards of our recent purpose in order to expand our activities based on our experiences and knowledge including Iran’s market potential, we're willing to cooperate by helping you to introduce the products and supplies related to this field. In the following of above statements, if XXX Company desire to cooperate with us, we can discuss more about the matter.
If XXX Company has any positive opinion for the first step we must take some clear and complete information related to advantage of XXX’s software or product compared to other competitors from standpoint of economic, applied and technical.
I'm looking forward to hear from you again.
Regards,
K. K.