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Anonymous Posted 14 years ago
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Dear Mr Mark
I am a student who attended for BSc Biotechnology - Year Two, it was my pleasure to meet you last Thursday. Could you please send me the timetable and application form which i have to fill it for the optional modules. I would also be grateful if you give me more information about pre-requisite and co-requisite modules.
Thank you for you consideration
Sincerely,
I am a student who attended for BSc Biotechnology - Year Two, it was my pleasure to meet you last Thursday. Could you please send me the timetable and application form which i have to fill it for the optional modules. I would also be grateful if you give me more information about pre-requisite and co-requisite modules.
Thank you for you consideration
Sincerely,
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Hi, Here are more edits. Dear Mr Mark Is this his first name or his last name? Needs to be last name.
- Hi, Here are more edits.
- Dear Mr Mark Is this his first name or his last name?
- Needs to be last name.
- I am a student who attended for BSc Biotechnology - Year Two , it was my pleasure to meet you last Thursday.
- Please send me the timetable, and the application form which I have to fill out for the optional modules.
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Hi,
Here are more edits.
Dear Mr Mark Is this his first name or his last name? Needs to be last name.
I am a student who attended for BSc Biotechnology - Year Two, it was my pleasure to meet you last Thursday.
Please send me the timeta
Here are more edits.
Dear Mr Mark Is this his first name or his last name? Needs to be last name.
I am a student who attended for BSc Biotechnology - Year Two, it was my pleasure to meet you last Thursday.
Please send me the timeta
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