Is my descriptive writing perculiar. Help me check it please
I was wandering in the dark-sullen forest. The
deafening silence gave me a feel solitary that even
introverts found their peers. Ahead was a duck-blue
rill, babbling and purring in the tudor forest,
through the dale The scent of water shaken my nostrils
that would give me a thirst so I went into the creek
and took a drink. It was taste-quenching. at the tree
next to the river was an lush-green apple. I bit into
it and it was sublime. It is the most wonderful bit of
the dead-silence forest. I wish I had a chance to
witness this wondrous, abundant river again.
Top answer
I wish English was your native language. I'd like to read you. Your imagination is terrific, and your courage and inventiveness with language are top-notch.
- I wish English was your native language.
- I'd like to read you.
- Your imagination is terrific, and your courage and inventiveness with language are top-notch.
- But, and it's a big but, you are overreaching.
- You make so many mistakes that it's like reading a secret code.
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I wish English was your native language. I'd like to read you. Your imagination is terrific, and your courage and inventiveness with language are top-notch. But, and it's a big but, you are overreaching. You make so many mistakes that it's like reading a secret code. The grammar is not too bad. It's the semantics. I don't know what to tell you except to keep going. Read. Study the dictionary.
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