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Mosja Posted 7 years ago
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A sultry-dark clouds were skipping through the sky weeping. Its tears falling down to the creek, causing the creek to drastically turned pink.

  

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Your ungrammatical mix of singular-plural mismatches is grating. The second sentence is a fragment because it lacks an inflected verb. A (singular) sultry-dark clouds (plural) were skipping through the sky weeping.

  • Your ungrammatical mix of singular-plural mismatches is grating.
  • The second sentence is a fragment because it lacks an inflected verb.
  • A (singular) sultry-dark clouds (plural) were skipping through the sky weeping.
  • Its (singular) tears falling down to the creek, causing the creek to drastically turned (wrong form) pink.
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Your ungrammatical mix of singular-plural mismatches is grating. The second sentence is a fragment because it lacks an inflected verb.


A (singular) sultry-dark clouds (plural) were skipping through the sky weeping. Its (singular) tears falling down to the creek, causing the creek to drastically turned (wrong form

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