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Anonymous Posted 17 years ago
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Is my daugthers text alright?
I need to know if the text my daugther has writen is alright. It´s very urgent. It´s for a test.
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My name´s XXXX XXXX. I´m XX years old. I grew up in XXXX but I´ve been in living in XXXX for about a year now. I live with my parents whom I love very much and my 3 adoreable pets.
Laki my dog and Bruno and Stitch my cats. I´m a very strange person. (Trust me when I say very) I have loads of weird habbits but there will be no further information about my weirdness. My hobbies are writing, drawing, reading (mostly science fiction and fantasy), music (U2, The Beatles, Bob Dylan etc.), movies (oh, so many..don´t let me get started) and telly. Preferably british telly!! Shows like Doctor Who or Life on Mars. Although I do have rather shareable hobbies I spent most of my time on my own. Because I don´t have many friends. Well that´s almost everything there´s to know about me.
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My name´s XXXX XXXX. I´m XX years old. I grew up in XXXX but I´ve been in living in XXXX for about a year now. I live with my parents whom I love very much and my 3 adoreable pets.
Laki my dog and Bruno and Stitch my cats. I´m a very strange person. (Trust me when I say very) I have loads of weird habbits but there will be no further information about my weirdness. My hobbies are writing, drawing, reading (mostly science fiction and fantasy), music (U2, The Beatles, Bob Dylan etc.), movies (oh, so many..don´t let me get started) and telly. Preferably british telly!! Shows like Doctor Who or Life on Mars. Although I do have rather shareable hobbies I spent most of my time on my own. Because I don´t have many friends. Well that´s almost everything there´s to know about me.
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Hi, I have made some corrections to the text you entered. Corrections are in Italic Fonts. My name´s XXXX XXXX.
- Hi, I have made some corrections to the text you entered.
- Corrections are in Italic Fonts.
- My name´s XXXX XXXX.
- I´m XX years old.
- I grew up in XXXX but I´ve been in living in XXXX for about a year now.
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Hi, I have made some corrections to the text you entered. Corrections are in Italic Fonts.
My name´s XXXX XXXX. I´m XX years old. I grew up in XXXX but I´ve been in living in XXXX for about a year now. I live with my parents whom I love very much and my 3 adoreable pets.
Laki my dog and Bruno and Stitch my cats. I´m a very strange person. (Trust me when I say very) I hav
My name´s XXXX XXXX. I´m XX years old. I grew up in XXXX but I´ve been in living in XXXX for about a year now. I live with my parents whom I love very much and my 3 adoreable pets.
Laki my dog and Bruno and Stitch my cats. I´m a very strange person. (Trust me when I say very) I hav
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Someone else corrected your daughter's text. I'm correcting yours.
"I need to know if the text my daugther has writen is alright. It´s very urgent. It´s for a test."
I need to know if the text my daughter has written is alright. It´s very urgent. It´s for a test.
Nitpicky? Yes and no. This is about eight years old, so your daughter is out of school or in college. But spellch
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