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Ansor Posted 13 years ago
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Is my cv text correct?

Hello, could someone check the description of my duties for grammatical errors. It would be highly appreciated.

Working in Legal Department on various legal and policy issues of economic and trade development of the Republic. My job responsibilities, among others, include:

• providing verbal advice and written legal opinions to the Ministry on the legal implications of proposed policies and actions and on compliance with state laws and regulations;
• participation in developing and supporting the Ministry's legislative initiatives and coordinating the analysis of legislation and developing and articulating the views of the Ministry on pending legislation;
• responsible for obtaining required clearances and interagency consensus on Ministerial letters, reports, and legislative proposals for delivery to the Government;
• representing the Ministry's view in interagency deliberations on legislative proposals and expressions of legislative views advanced by other agencies;
• participating in the substantive servicing of the interagency working groups and commissions regarding all matters involved in and concerned with the activities and interests of the Ministry including preparation of reports on various legal issues on the agenda of these organs for their consideration;
• preparing official communications with Government, ministries and other state agencies, intergovernmental organizations, and responding to queries about various issues addressed by the Department;
• assisting in preparation of early drafts of the resolutions to be adopted by the Ministry;
• actively participating in the negotiation and enforcement of a variety of international agreements, including bilateral and multilateral trade agreements, bilateral investment treaties;
• administering the Ministry’s contract, reviewing contract modifications, advising on contract interpretation, advancing the Ministry’s position when disagreement arises, and participating in dispute resolution.
• performing comprehensive legal research and analysis and preparing memoranda, studies and reports on various legal topics as requested by the Head of the Department

Thank you all!
  

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Hi, Ansor. Welcome to the Forum. Working in Legal Department on various legal and policy issues of economic and trade development of the Republic.

  • Hi, Ansor.
  • Welcome to the Forum.
  • Working in Legal Department on various legal and policy issues of economic and trade development of the Republic.
  • Unless this is a sub-heading, the underlined part makes this sentence odd and ungrammatical.
  • Also, it probably should be the Legal Department...
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Hi, Ansor. Welcome to the Forum.

Working in Legal Department on various legal and policy issues of economic and trade development of the Republic.
Unless this is a sub-heading, the underlined part makes this sentence odd and ungrammatical. Also, it probably should be
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Thank you very much for your help Blue Jay!

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