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hi forumsplease help me to improve my artcel. i put one pargraph can you help me? You can breed Sumatra Barb at your aquarium. You should entire your aquarium with the filter. You must be sure your aquarium is clean and comfortable. The aquarium must provide enough space fro the fish. I think 1 gallon for one fish is enough. If you have 10-gallon aquarium, you can put five pairs or ten fish at the aquarium. The ratio male and female is 1:1.

Eimai_Anglos · Accepted Answer

{hi forums}

Hi, forum members!

{please help me to improve my artcel.}

Please help me to improve my article.

{i put one pargraph can you help me? }

I have posted one paragraph. Can you help me?

{You can breed Sumatra Barb at your aquarium.}

OK.

{You should entire your aquarium with the filter.}

You should equip your aquarium with a filter.

{You must be sure your aquarium is clean and comfortable.}

OK.

{The aquarium must provide enough space fro the fish.}

The aquarium must provide enough space for the fish.

{I think 1 gallon for one fish is enough.}

OK.

{If you have 10-gallon aquarium, you can put five pairs or ten fish at the aquarium.}

If you have a 10-gallon aquarium, you can put five pairs (or ten fish) into the aquarium.

{The ratio male and female is 1:1.}

The ratio male to female is 1:1.

Eimai_Anglos · Answer

Sorry:-

{The ratio male and female is 1:1.}

The ratio of male to female is 1:1.

Forlan · Answer

thanks eimai. You are very kind.[Y]

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