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Hi, I have the next homework.
Write your profile for the website of a club you belong to. Write three sentences. Write about:
- Your name and age
- Your work or studies
- Your interests
This is what I've written:
Hi, you are on Kirill Yellow's page. I am twenty-two-years old guy who works at a bank as an Android Developer. In spare time, I am obsessed with playing the guitar and learning English. In fact, I find those two very similar to each other because with this "tools" you could build stories and express yourself in different ways. Thanks for visiting! Let's stay in touch, just don't forget to subscribe to RSS feed.
Thanks in advance!
Top answer
You didn't include your name. I made some corrections for you. Hi, you are on the Kirill Yellow page.
- You didn't include your name.
- I made some corrections for you.
- Hi, you are on the Kirill Yellow page.
- My name is _____, and I am a twenty-two-year old guy who works at a bank as an Android Developer.
- In my spare time, I am obsessed with playing the guitar and learning English.
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You didn't include your name. I made some corrections for you.
Hi, you are on the Kirill Yellow page. My name is _____, and I am a twenty-two-year old guy who works at a bank as an Android Developer. In my spare time, I am obsessed with playing the guitar and learning English. In fact, I find those two things very similar to each other because with these "tools," you can build stories an
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