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Lost Stranger Posted 9 years ago
Grammar

Is it written correctly?

Dear Anna, please, take the keys under the carpet. When you come in, do not forget to water the plants and after you do this feed the pets. Last but not least check my mail, I ordered toys for my kids, they will be mad if won't get them, Batman and Superman.If it is possible, may you change the sentence ?

If it is possible, may you change the sentence so it would be written more fluent?


Thanks a lot!

  

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Anna, The keys are under the carpet, so you can let yourself in. Don't forget to water the plants and feed the pets. And please check the mail.

  • Anna, The keys are under the carpet, so you can let yourself in.
  • Don't forget to water the plants and feed the pets.
  • And please check the mail.
  • I'm expecting toys for the kids (Batman and Superman).
  • They'll be disappointed if we don't get them soon.
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Anna,

The keys are under the carpet, so you can let yourself in. Don't forget to water the plants and feed the pets. And please check the mail. I'm expecting toys for the kids (Batman and Superman). They'll be disappointed if we don't get them soon.

CJ

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