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Lost Stranger Posted 9 years ago
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Yesterday afternoon, when I came home the moon was golden, kids were playing with old dirty labrador in the garden. The kitchen was smelling good it is because of Many who cooked tomato soup. I asked her," What is the time?". She answered, "It is 19:00". I was shocked. Like two hours go by, and Mr Willson had not come. Something went wrong....


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) and kids were playing with the old dirty L abrador in the garden. The kitchen smelled was smelling good it is because of Many 's home- cooked tomato soup. " I was shocked.

  • ) and kids were playing with the old dirty L abrador in the garden.
  • The kitchen smelled was smelling good it is because of Many 's home- cooked tomato soup.
  • " I was shocked.
  • T wo hours had gone by, and Mr Willson had not come.
  • Something went wrong.
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Yesterday afternoon when I came home, the moon was golden (The moon can be golden in the evening or night, not in the afternoon.) and kids were playing with the old dirty Labrador in the garden. The kitchen smelled was smelling good it is because of Many's home-cooked tomato soup. I asked her, "What is the

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