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Lost Stranger Posted 9 years ago
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The story began in 1810 when Armand Peugeot founded a factory that manufactured coffee mill.After much contemplation he mused "Mmm... It's unbelievably boring. Why would I start to produce bicycles?" In fact, it was not the end in couple years later Mr.Peugeot built the first car ,an slow steam tricycle, this was followed in 1890 by an internal combustion car with a Panhard-Daimler engine.

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The story began in 1810 when Armand Peugeot founded a factory that manufactured coffee mill s . After much contemplation , he mused "Mmm... It's unbelievably boring.

— Dokterjokkebrok

  • The story began in 1810 when Armand Peugeot founded a factory that manufactured coffee mill s .
  • After much contemplation , he mused "Mmm...
  • It's unbelievably boring.
  • Peugeot built the first car , an a slow steam tricycle, this which was followed in 1890 by an internal combustion car with a Panhard-Daimler engine.
  • Thanks.
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The story began in 1810 when Armand Peugeot founded a factory that manufactured coffee mills. After much contemplation, he mused "Mmm... It's unbelievably boring. Why would I start to produce bicycles?" In fact, it was not the end in couple years later Mr.Peugeot built the first car ,an
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Thank you, what kind of issues did you notice?)
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The story began in 1810 when Armand Peugeot founded a factory that manufactured coffee mills.After much contemplation he mused "Mmm... It's unbelievably boring. Why would I start to produce bicycles?" In fact, it was not the end in couple years later Mr.Peugeot built the first car, a slow steam tricycle, which was followed in 1890 by an internal combustion car with a Panhard-Daimler engine.
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The story began in 1810 when Armand Peugeot founded a factory that manufactured coffee mills.After much contemplation he mused "Mmm... It's unbelievably boring. Why would I start to produce bicycles?" In fact, it was not the en
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Can it be written this way:
The story began in 1810 when Armand Peugeot founded a factory that manufactured coffee mills,after much contemplation he mused "Mmm... it's unbelievably boring, why would I start to produce bicycles?" In fact, it was not the end,in couple years later, Mr.Peugeot built the first car, a slow steam tricycle, which was followed in 1890 by an internal combustion
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The story began in 1810 when Armand Peugeot founded a factory that manufactured coffee mills.After much (Bad spacing. You need a space after the period.) contemplation he mused "Mmm... It's unbelievably boring. (What does "it" refer to? You need to
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