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Lost Stranger Posted 9 years ago
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Greeting, the second wish is it can be written more fluently than it is?
The story began in the 1810 where Armand Peugeot founded a coffee meal manufacture.After much contemplation he figured out "Mmm... It's unbelievably boring, why would I started to produce bicycles?"

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The story began in the 1810 when Armand Peugeot founded a coffee meal manufactur business . After much contemplation he mused figured out "Mmm... It's unbelievably boring .

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  • The story began in the 1810 when Armand Peugeot founded a coffee meal manufactur business .
  • After much contemplation he mused figured out "Mmm...
  • It's unbelievably boring .
  • " What do you mean by "it"?
  • The coffee business?
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The story began in the 1810 when Armand Peugeot founded a coffee meal manufactur business.
After much contemplation he mused figured out "Mmm... It's unbelievably boring. Why would I start to produce bicycles?"

What do you mean by "it"? The coffee business?
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Yes, the coffee business.
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The story began in 1810 when Armand Peugeot founded a coffee business. He imported the raw coffee beans, roasted them, ground them and sold the ground coffee.
After much contemplation he mused "Mmm... This coffee business is unbelievably boring. Why don't I start to manufacture bicycles?"
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I do apologize, I was meant coffee mill factory.
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Chrge JimmI do apologize. I was meant a coffee mill factory.
His factory manufactured coffee mills.
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