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Anonymous Posted 11 years ago
Letter Writing

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Effective communication is an important part of business success.

To make our business communication better, we would like to help you to exchange your reporting and communication skills among you.

We have to remember that communication in an international team is especially hard one and requires a lot of our attention.

Therefore in next week we will read your reports and pick the best parts of them to be shared.

We are going to use the most “beautiful” parts of executive summary as an example of perfect reporting for our managers.

And to single out the author of the best report we will name this example after him (e.g. How perfect ExecutiveSummary looks like: Adria’s way of reporting).

Usage of excel decorating tools (colors, fonts etc.) is welcome Emotion: wink

There is an interesting guide to business communication called “7 Cs of effective communication” – theory’s description in the link below:
http://www.managementstudyguide.com/seven-cs-of-effective-communication.htm
  

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" "Excel (capitalized)" "called 'Seven C's of Effective Communication" (its full name).

  • " "Excel (capitalized)" "called 'Seven C's of Effective Communication" (its full name).
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Some suggestions:
"between" instead of "among"
"is an especially hard one"
"Therefore in/during the next.."
"most 'beautiful' (really?) parts of our executive summary"
"...best report, we"
"e.g., What a perfect.."
"Excel (capitalized)"
"called 'Seven C's of Effective Communication" (its full name).

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