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This small dialogue is taken from an old crime drama. I've tried to translate it into English. It is ok? Could you correct, please.
A: - What am I supposed to do? ( or "What should I do" is better?) B: - Thirty thousand tomorrow morning right here will suit me perfectly. A: - Are you not afraid? If I start strangling you right here then you tell me everything free, don't you? B: - I'm not afraid. Neither you nor I need an extra noise about this issue. I am an unimportant person, I think it is only the chance (opportunity) in my life.
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Hope this helps, I edited your sentences . A: What am I supposed to do? (is correct, but both work) B: Thirty-thousand tomorrow morning, right here will suit me perfectly.
- Hope this helps, I edited your sentences .
- A: What am I supposed to do?
- (is correct, but both work) B: Thirty-thousand tomorrow morning, right here will suit me perfectly.
- (I wasn't sure on this one because it is a "run on" sentence, meaning two sentences were combined without a transition) A: Are you not afraid?
- (correct) If I start strangling you, right here, then you would tell me everything for free, wouldn't you?
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Hope this helps, I edited your sentences .
A: What am I supposed to do? (is correct, but both work)
B: Thirty-thousand tomorrow morning, right here will suit me perfectly. (I wasn't sure on this one because it is a "run on" sentence, meaning two sentences were combined without a transition)
A: Are you not afraid? (correct) If I start strangling you, right here, then you would
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