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Canada_1966 Posted 14 years ago
Essay & Composition Writing

Is it understable?

When a mother hears about her son who is venerated by the elites that he is a renowned erudite, she attains a state that gives her joyful moments exceed the ecstasy of her experience during the time of his birth.
  

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I see one mistake; "exceed" should be "exceeding" or "that exceed". "Erudite" is an adjective, but I have no problem with using it as a noun, especially in such an overblown sentence.

— Enoon

  • I see one mistake; "exceed" should be "exceeding" or "that exceed".
  • "Erudite" is an adjective, but I have no problem with using it as a noun, especially in such an overblown sentence.
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I see one mistake; "exceed" should be "exceeding" or "that exceed". "Erudite" is an adjective, but I have no problem with using it as a noun, especially in such an overblown sentence.
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Thanks Enoon. Is this sentence understandable to you?
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Yes, but I am famous for my ability to understand things. (I hate smileys.)
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Hi,

In most contexts, people would be amused if you said this sentence.
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This is a verse from one of the old tamil literature. I just try to translate that to improve my english.

--Shi
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Canada_1966This is a verse from one of the old tamil literature. I just try to translate that to improve my english.--Shi
Ah. In that case, I like it.
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