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Anonymous Posted 18 years ago
Letter Writing
is it too informal?
Hi! I'd like to know your oppinion about this sentence:
I feel that this would be a perfect chance for me to learn and that I would enjoy the opportunity to broaden my cultural awareness by living at a foreign country. I would especially like to use and develop the skills and knowledge I have gained ...
It's supposed to be part of a motivation letter, but I'm not sure if the first part is too informal, or the second too formal...I've changed it 1000times! Please, help!
Thanks!
I feel that this would be a perfect chance for me to learn and that I would enjoy the opportunity to broaden my cultural awareness by living at a foreign country. I would especially like to use and develop the skills and knowledge I have gained ...
It's supposed to be part of a motivation letter, but I'm not sure if the first part is too informal, or the second too formal...I've changed it 1000times! Please, help!
Thanks!
Top answer
I feel that this (what is "this"? Do you mean attending XYZ school? ) would offer a perfect chance for me to learn.
- I feel that this (what is "this"?
- Do you mean attending XYZ school?
- ) would offer a perfect chance for me to learn.
- I would also enjoy the opportunity to broaden my cultural awareness by living in a foreign country.
- I look forward to using and developing the skills and knowledge I have gained ...
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I feel that this (what is "this"? Do you mean attending XYZ school?) would offer a perfect chance for me to learn. I would also enjoy the opportunity to broaden my cultural awareness by living in a foreign country. I look forward to using and developing the skills and knowledge I have gained ...
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