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TreeView Posted 14 years ago
Grammar
Is it stupid and incorrect
DAY after day
I run away.
Sadness and pain
Are all that remains.
World is unreal.
That's what I feel
In the end.
Soul that I'd sold
I couldn't hold.
Eternal way
Is my ruthless pay.
But I believe
I could retrieve
All I've lost.
I run away.
Sadness and pain
Are all that remains.
World is unreal.
That's what I feel
In the end.
Soul that I'd sold
I couldn't hold.
Eternal way
Is my ruthless pay.
But I believe
I could retrieve
All I've lost.
Top answer
Poetry follows its own rules, so it cannot be incorrect. The poet is completely free to put anything he wants on the page. Anything.
- Poetry follows its own rules, so it cannot be incorrect.
- The poet is completely free to put anything he wants on the page.
- Anything.
- It cannot be stupid, either.
- You add your sounds to the timbre of the human voice, and that is always legitimate.
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Poetry follows its own rules, so it cannot be incorrect. The poet is completely free to put anything he wants on the page. Anything.
It cannot be stupid, either. You add your sounds to the timbre of the human voice, and that is always legitimate.
You might want to post this in Poetry
It cannot be stupid, either. You add your sounds to the timbre of the human voice, and that is always legitimate.
You might want to post this in Poetry
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"Soul that I'd sold I couldn't hold" the i'd sold sounds kinda weird / wrong, imo.
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