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Gillyflower Posted 10 years ago
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Is it right to say "improvment increases"?

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Is it right to say "improvment increases"?
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Our study shows that an hour of nap at 9 pm or 4:30 am can improve performance at the shift end (7 am) compared to no nap. The improvement particularly increases for nap at 4:30 am
  

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gillyflower Is it right to say "improvment increases"? No. Our study shows that an hour 's nap at 9 pm or 4:30 am can improve performance at the end of a shift (7 am) as compared to no nap.

  • gillyflower Is it right to say "improvment increases"?
  • No.
  • Our study shows that an hour 's nap at 9 pm or 4:30 am can improve performance at the end of a shift (7 am) as compared to no nap.
  • The improvement is most marked / best / particularly noticeable for a nap at 4:30 am.
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gillyflowerIs it right to say "improvment increases"?
No.

Our study shows that an hour's nap at 9 pm or 4:30 am can improve performance at the end of a shift (7 am) as compared to no nap. The improvement is most marked / best / particularly noticeable for a nap at 4:30 am.
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AlpheccaStarsan hour's nap at 9 pm or 4:30 am
What about this: a nap of an hour. Is this OK? which one is better to use in a paper.

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