I have to send a formal email to an intern's mentor at college stating that she has joined the company with the date of joining and is working under so and so person. So, I want to clarify if the grammar used in the below sentence is correct or not and also can I make it more formal?
Dear Q,
XYZ has joined X company as an intern from 3rd of June and is currently working with the Jacquard Team under the guidance of Y.
Regards,
Z
Dear Q, This is to confirm that XYZ joined X company as an intern on the 3rd of June and is currently working with the Jacquard Team under the guidance of Y. Regards, and also can I make it more formal? Yes.
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Dear Q,
This is to confirm that XYZ joined X company as an intern on the 3rd of June and is currently working with the Jacquard Team under the guidance of Y.
Regards,
and also can I make it more formal?
Yes. Start with Dear Professor Smith,
and end with Yours sincerely,