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Ishani Gupta Posted 7 years ago
Grammar

Is it right?

I have to send a formal email to an intern's mentor at college stating that she has joined the company with the date of joining and is working under so and so person. So, I want to clarify if the grammar used in the below sentence is correct or not and also can I make it more formal?

Dear Q,

XYZ has joined X company as an intern from 3rd of June and is currently working with the Jacquard Team under the guidance of Y.

Regards,

Z

  

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Dear Q, This is to confirm that XYZ joined X company as an intern on the 3rd of June and is currently working with the Jacquard Team under the guidance of Y. Regards, and also can I make it more formal? Yes.

  • Dear Q, This is to confirm that XYZ joined X company as an intern on the 3rd of June and is currently working with the Jacquard Team under the guidance of Y.
  • Regards, and also can I make it more formal?
  • Yes.
  • Start with Dear Professor Smith, and end with Yours sincerely,
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Dear Q,

This is to confirm that XYZ joined X company as an intern on the 3rd of June and is currently working with the Jacquard Team under the guidance of Y.

Regards,


and also can I make it more formal?

Yes. Start with Dear Professor Smith,

and end with Yours sincerely,

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