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Anonymous Posted 7 years ago
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Is it right?

Sentence: I was a light in the darkness of the room whose light is turned off.

Is there any mistake in this sentence?

If there is a mistake, Can you explain it?

  

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I was a light in the darkness of the room whose light is turned off. Here are some edits and comments. I was a light Are you speaking figuratively?

— Clive

  • I was a light in the darkness of the room whose light is turned off.
  • Here are some edits and comments.
  • I was a light Are you speaking figuratively?
  • Do you mean you were a source of inspiration to people?
  • the room You seem to be making a general statement, so say ' a room', just as you said ' a light'.
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I was a light in the darkness of the room whose light is turned off.

Here are some edits and comments.

I was a light Are you speaking figuratively? Do you mean you were a source of inspiration to people?

the room You seem to be making a general statement, so say 'a room', just as you said 'a light'.

is turned off You start

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