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Bedoor Posted 16 years ago
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Is it right?

Hi, Emotion: smile

Does this sentence sound right?

I watched that game on TV I was yelling and cheering up but my little sister was neutral .

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It is totally understandable and not wrong in any way, but I would word it a little differently to make it sound more fluent. My sister remained neutral about the teams while I was yelling and cheering as we watched it on TV. I watched that game on TV.

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  • It is totally understandable and not wrong in any way, but I would word it a little differently to make it sound more fluent.
  • My sister remained neutral about the teams while I was yelling and cheering as we watched it on TV.
  • I watched that game on TV.
  • I was yelling and cheering, but my little sister didn't take sides.
  • I watched that game on TV.
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It is totally understandable and not wrong in any way, but I would word it a little differently to make it sound more fluent.

My sister remained neutral about the teams while I was yelling and cheering as we watched it on TV.

I watched that game on TV. I was yelling and cheering, but my little sister didn't take sides.

I watched that game on TV. I was yelling and cheeri
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