Is it possible to correct my paragraf, thank you very muc.

She went upstairs searched for something in the upstairs’ kitchen and came back to the room within ten minutes. She had found a dropper. She filled it with the broth, took the raven into her hand, and rubbed the dropper gently along its beak to stimulate it to open its mouth. As it opened its bill, she squeezed one drop of the broth into the mouth of the raven by gently pulling down the lower part of its beak. The raven was not able to drink it but it tried to feed it all. Then the next drop followed the first, and then the third one. When it was full, it pulled its head back and turned.