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Anonymous Posted 20 years ago
Letter Writing

is it polite enough?

dear all,

please help me with this letter, I am not sure, if it is ok.

maybe I didnt choose right words or something like that...
thank you very much
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Dear Madam ******

I am a graduate of Marketing Communication at in (2006).
I am writing you because I would like to ask you, when is deadline to apply for admission at your postgraduate one year MSc Public Relations program starting in September 2007. I learn about this program from your school website, and I am very interested in it.
I would like to send you my motivation letter, CV and fill in application, but first of all I would like to find out if it is still up-to-date.

Thank you for your help.
Yours sincerely,

***********
  

Top answer

Hi, Dear Ms. Sc. Public Relations program, starting in September 2007.

— Clive

  • Hi, Dear Ms.
  • Sc.
  • Public Relations program, starting in September 2007.
  • I learned about this program from your website, and I am very interested.
  • Thank you for your help.
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Hi,

Dear Ms. ******,

I am writing to ask when the deadline is for admission applications for your postgraduate one year M.Sc. Public Relations program, starting in September 2007. I learned about this program from your website, and I am very interested.

Thank you for your help.

Yours sincerely,

Best wishes, Clive
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Thanks a lot for your fast correction.

Big help for me
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