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Cecilia Tang Posted 19 years ago
Business & Finance
is it ok if i write the letter for establish business relation like this?
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00 Can you give me any suggestion about my letter for establish business relation as below?Thank you. 02 br
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00 Dear all, 02 br
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00 I would like to take this opportunity to introduce me to you. This is *** from *** Printing Co., Ltd. 02 br
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00 I obtain your information from *** who was responsible for your account at *** company.And know that all of you are kind business partner. We would like to establish business relation with you for our mutual benefit. It's appreciated that have your feedback if available.Thank you in advance!!! 02 br
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00 We, a professional printing and packaging manufacturer, specialized in various of printed package such as shopping bags, set up and folding boxes, calendars, cards and books. We are ready to supply you with fashionable designed, good quality and competitive prices. We have been enjoyed high reputation from our customers home and aboard.To get more information, please click our company sebwite ( 01 a 00 www.***.com 02 a 00 ). 02 br
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00 We're pleased to add you to our list of clients. 00 If you have any questions, please feel free to contact with me. 02 br
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00 Yours sincerely, 02 br
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00 Cecilia 02 br
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00 Hello everyone, 02 br
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00 Can you give me any suggestion about my letter for establish business relation as below?Thank you. 02 br
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00 Dear all, 02 br
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00 I would like to take this opportunity to introduce me to you. This is *** from *** Printing Co., Ltd. 02 br
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00 I obtain your information from *** who was responsible for your account at *** company.And know that all of you are kind business partner. We would like to establish business relation with you for our mutual benefit. It's appreciated that have your feedback if available.Thank you in advance!!! 02 br
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00 We, a professional printing and packaging manufacturer, specialized in various of printed package such as shopping bags, set up and folding boxes, calendars, cards and books. We are ready to supply you with fashionable designed, good quality and competitive prices. We have been enjoyed high reputation from our customers home and aboard.To get more information, please click our company sebwite ( 01 a 00 www.***.com 02 a 00 ). 02 br
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00 We're pleased to add you to our list of clients. 00 If you have any questions, please feel free to contact with me. 02 br
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00 Yours sincerely, 02 br
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00 Cecilia 02 br
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1 b 00 Dear all, 02 b 00 - only appropriate if each letter is going to be read by several people, and very informal. 02 br 02 br 02 br 02 br 02 br 00 I would like to take this opportunity to introduce 01 b 00 myself 02 b 00 . 02 br 02 br 02 br 02 br 02 br 02 br 00 I 01 b 00 obtained 02 b 00 your 01 b 00 details 02 b 00 from *** who was responsible for your account at *** company 01 b 00 and know that you are the type of business we would like to partner with 02 b 00 .
- 1 b 00 Dear all, 02 b 00 - only appropriate if each letter is going to be read by several people, and very informal.
- 02 br 02 br 02 br 02 br 02 br 00 I would like to take this opportunity to introduce 01 b 00 myself 02 b 00 .
- 02 br 02 br 02 br 02 br 02 br 02 br 00 I 01 b 00 obtained 02 b 00 your 01 b 00 details 02 b 00 from *** who was responsible for your account at *** company 01 b 00 and know that you are the type of business we would like to partner with 02 b 00 .
- We would like to establish 01 b 00 a 02 b 00 business relation with you for our mutual benefit.
- 02 b 02 br 02 br 02 br 02 br 02 br 00 We, a professional printing and packaging manufacturer, 01 b 00 specialize 02 b 00 in various 01 b 00 types 02 b 00 of printed 01 b 00 materials 02 b 00 such as shopping bags, set up and folding boxes, calendars, cards and books.
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1 b 00 Dear all, 02 b 00 - only appropriate if each letter is going to be read by several people, and very informal. Dear Sir/Madam is better. 02 br
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