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Pupil Posted 9 years ago
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Is it ok?

This small dialogue is taken from an old not English-speaking movie. Is it ok? could you correct, please?

A: - Could you show me your financial statements? Ok. No, no, no. I have already seen this in Moscow. Give me your current ( actual?) financial statements. B: - Well, you see, we decided to recheck all the documentation, but the employee doing the work, has been ill, and in order not to waste time she has taken all the papers home. A: - Call her immediately. Let her bring them back! B: - I'm afraid, she doesn't have a phone. A: - Gentlemen, tomorrow morning the documentation must be on this table.

  

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” Actual would apply if what was offered was just a rewritten summary in informal language. It does appear from the next sentence that ‘Actual’ would apply here. ” “Let” seems inappropriate (meaning ‘permit her to’).

  • ” Actual would apply if what was offered was just a rewritten summary in informal language.
  • It does appear from the next sentence that ‘Actual’ would apply here.
  • ” “Let” seems inappropriate (meaning ‘permit her to’).
  • I would suggest “Make her …” The rest is acceptable.
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“Could you…” implies ‘is it possible for you…’ I believe it should be, “Would you…”

“Give me your current financial statements.” Actual would apply if what was offered was just a rewritten summary in informal language. It does appear from the next sentence that ‘Actual’ would apply here.

“Well, you see, we decided to recheck all the documentation; but the employee doing th

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