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Huong Ho Posted 12 years ago
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Let start by saying what we need to achieve is the update on the design of our DVD recorder. The first thing we need to do is improve picture and sound quality. I want engineers to get on to that. While we are waiting for the answer, I suggest designers start by coming up with new colours and designs. Let’s look at the show slides of computers’s latest models. Finally, to get results, I want the marketing team to get market feedback on prototype. To my point of view, the feedback should be got by organizing focus group or questions.
  

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Frankly, I don't understand some of what you want to say, but I think it's this: Let's start by saying that we need to update the design of our DVD recorder. The first thing we need to do is improve picture and sound quality. I want our engineers to get onto that.

— Mister Micawber

  • Frankly, I don't understand some of what you want to say, but I think it's this: Let's start by saying that we need to update the design of our DVD recorder.
  • The first thing we need to do is improve picture and sound quality.
  • I want our engineers to get onto that.
  • While we are waiting for their solutions , I suggest that our designers start by coming up with some new colours and designs.
  • Let’s look at a slide show of the latest computer models.
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Frankly, I don't understand some of what you want to say, but I think it's this:


Let's start by saying that we need to update the design of our DVD recorder. The first thing we need to do is improve picture and sound quality. I want our engineers to get onto that.

While we are waiting for their solutions, I s
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