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Anonymous Posted 12 years ago
Grammar

Is it necessary to rephrase this?

The Medical commission is attended by children of pre-school age and primary school students from 1st to 4th grade.

is this sentence okay? especially underlined parts?
  

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Hi I think that's fine. The passive verb is good; 'pre-school age' is a good noun phrase; and the commission is available for primary school children in the grades that you state I wonder slightly about the capitals at the beginning. It should probably be the Medical Commission or the medical commission.

— Dave_anon

  • Hi I think that's fine.
  • The passive verb is good; 'pre-school age' is a good noun phrase; and the commission is available for primary school children in the grades that you state I wonder slightly about the capitals at the beginning.
  • It should probably be the Medical Commission or the medical commission.
  • It depends whether it's an official title or not Dave
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Hi

I think that's fine. The passive verb is good; 'pre-school age' is a good noun phrase; and the commission is available for primary school children in the grades that you state

I wonder slightly about the capitals at the beginning. It should probably be the Medical Commission or the medical commission. It depends whether it's an official title or not

Dave
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I don't see how a commission can be attended.
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Hi

I took it to be metonymic for something like 'surgery run by the Medical Commission'

Dave
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