Is it natural?
Hello. I posted this about two weeks ago...
"Susan has just got a new job. She was a little nervous to start, but I think it's going okay, though there was an incident two days ago. She had lost a big sale so the bossed yelled at her."
...and was told (as I suspected) that "but..." and "though..." don't go well together.
Could I write it this way instead and would it be natural?
"Susan has just got a new job. She was a little nervous to start, but I think it's going okay. There was an incident two days ago, though. She had lost a big sale so the bossed yelled at her."
Thank you.
Top answer
Could I write it this way instead and would it be natural? Yes, with thee edits. "Susan has just got a new job.
- Could I write it this way instead and would it be natural?
- Yes, with thee edits.
- "Susan has just got a new job.
- She was a little nervous at the start , but I think it's going okay.
- There was an incident two days ago, though.
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Could I write it this way instead and would it be natural? Yes, with thee edits.
"Susan has just got a new job. She was a little nervous at the start , but I think it's going okay. There was an incident two days ago, though. She had lost a big sale so the boss yelled at her.
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