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Kunsusuki Posted 8 years ago
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Is it Incorrect?

Hi. Is saying 'it not only includes' incorrect in the following sentence? Thank you in advance for your response.

A subset of e-business is the e-marketing. It is the process of marketing a product or a service using the internet. It not only includes marketing on the internet, but also includes marketing that is done via e-mail and wireless media.

  

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A subset of e-business is e-marketing . This is the process of marketing a product or a service using the I nternet. It includes not only marketing on the I nternet, but also marketing that is done via e-mail and wireless media .

  • A subset of e-business is e-marketing .
  • This is the process of marketing a product or a service using the I nternet.
  • It includes not only marketing on the I nternet, but also marketing that is done via e-mail and wireless media .
  • However, the explanation seems contradictory.
  • First of all e-marketing is said to be done using the Internet, seemingly implied to be Internet-only, but then it is said to also include "wireless media".
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A subset of e-business is e-marketing. This is the process of marketing a product or a service using the Internet. It includes not only marketing on the Internet, but also marketing that is done via e-mail and wireless media.

However, the explanation seems contradictory. First of all e-marketing is said to be done using the Internet, seemi

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