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Anonymous Posted 10 years ago
Grammar

is it grammatically corret

i don't wanna come closer to you because i am afraid of loosing you in my dreams
  

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Anonymous i don't wanna come closer to you because i am afraid of loosing you in my dreams Sorry, no. There are no such words as i, and wanna . Correct sentences have punctuation marks.

  • Anonymous i don't wanna come closer to you because i am afraid of loosing you in my dreams Sorry, no.
  • There are no such words as i, and wanna .
  • Correct sentences have punctuation marks.
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Anonymous i don't wanna come closer to you because i am afraid of loosing you in my dreams
Sorry, no.
There are no such words as i, and wanna.
Correct sentences have punctuation marks.
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Hi

As an idea for a lyric, I think it's pretty good. 'Wanna' is ok in a song; you probably do need to capitalise the I at the beginning

Also, their is 'loosing' and 'losing'. I think you need 'losing' there

Dave

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